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The given chart compares the culture and leisure activities in which both boys and girls are participating.

The given chart compares the culture and leisure activities in which both boys and girls are participating. 2reQo
The given pie chart compares the culture and leisure activities in which both boys and girls are participating. The boys prefer to computer games, it is 34%. Both boys and girls are participating in the listen to music which is same(10%). In reading, both are particularly in activities 2% and 21% respectively. In case of basketball, the boys give the preference is 26% and the girls prefer to dancing is little more(27%). The participation of boys and girls are similar in the gymnastics and skateboard, is 11%. Both boys and girls are participate in soccer and netball respectively, which is near 16%. Overall, the large number of Boys prefer to computer games but the girls give the preference to dancing.
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are participating. The
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prefer to computer games, it is 34%. Both
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boys
and
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are participating in the listen to music which is same(10%). In reading, both are
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in activities 2% and 21%
respectively
. In case of basketball, the
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boys
give the preference is 26% and the
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girls
prefer to
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dancing
is
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more(27%). The participation of
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boys
and
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are similar in the gymnastics and skateboard, is 11%. Both
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boys
and
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are
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participate
in soccer and netball
respectively
, which is near 16%.
Overall
, the large number of
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Boys
prefer to computer games
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the
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give the preference to dancing.
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IELTS academic The given chart compares the culture and leisure activities in which both boys and girls are participating.

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