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The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organization in 2003 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The charts below show the percentage of volunteers by organization in 2003 and 2014. 9QLwW
The pie charts compare how many people working voluntarily for organizations in 2003 and in 2014. Overall, most of the organizations had the number of volunteers increased, except for educational, art and others. In 2014, environmental and sport organizations had the highest figures. In 2003, 24% of people worked voluntarily for educational organization, environmental and art organizations ranked second and third, at 21% and 18% respectively. 11 years later, the figure for environmental organization rose to 29%. By contrast, educational and art organizations experienced fall of 7% and 6% respectively. The figure for volunteers working for sport organization in the year 2003 was 15%, compared to 7% in health care organization and 15% in other organizations. Over the course of 11 years, sport organization saw a significant growth in the number of volunteers. The proportion of people working for health care organization and others also increased by 1% and 6% respectively.
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, environmental and art
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ranked second and third, at 21% and 18%
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rose to 29%. By contrast, educational and art
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experienced fall of 7% and 6%
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in the year 2003 was 15%, compared to 7% in health care
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