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The bar chart shows past and future figures for levels of reforestation in four countries and the world. The pie chart shows current attitudes about reforestation.

The bar chart shows past and future figures for levels of reforestation in four countries and the world. The pie chart shows current attitudes about reforestation. 7ra0n
The bar chart depicts the proportion of reforestation of four countries: Ireland, Thailand, Hungary, Tasmania, and the World in the past and its prediction in the future, whereas the pie chart illustrates the opinion of citizens about the same problem at the present. Overall, as can be seen in the bar chart, it is expected that the percentage of reforestation of four regions and the world will be increasing in 2030. Regarding the pie chart, the proportion of people who are concerned with this problem accounts for the highest figure. Looking at the bar chart, in 1990, the percentage of reforestation in Ireland was 1, 4%, which was the highest figure. Over a twenty-year period from 1990, to 2010, this figure increased gradually to 1, 5%, and this proportion is estimated to reach a peak at approximately 1, 7% in 2030. Similarly, regarding Tasmania, its figure for reforestation in 1990 was 1, 2% and rose significantly to 1, 5% in 2010, equal to this percentage of Ireland in the same year. The expectation is that in 2030, the rate of tree-planting in this region will be increasing slightly to 1, 6%. Accounting for third place, Thailand and the World had the same figure over the years: 1% in 1990 and 2010. In 2030, this proportion of Thailand is expected to grow to 1, 3%, while that for the World will rise to around 1, 4%. Hungary is the country which has the lowest percentage of reforestation: in 1990, its figure for this project was just 0, 5% and it rose steadily to 0, 6% over the next 20 years. And in 2030, this rate is predicted to increase tremendously to just over 1%. As can be seen in the pie chart, most people are concerned about reforestation, which occupies 36% of the chart. Likewise, the figure for the opinion of people who are very concerned is not quite as many as concerned opinion, accounting for 31%. Similarly, there is a respectable minority of citizens who are unconcerned with tree-planting, represented 28%. Meanwhile, a tiny minority of inhabitants who choose not to share their opinion is 5%, accounting for the lowest proportion.
The bar
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of reforestation of four countries: Ireland, Thailand, Hungary, Tasmania, and the
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World
in the past and its prediction in the future, whereas the pie
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illustrates the
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opinion
of citizens about the same problem at the present.
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, it is
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of reforestation of four regions and the
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will be increasing in 2030. Regarding the pie
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with this problem accounts for the highest figure.

Looking at the bar
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, in 1990, the
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of reforestation in Ireland was 1, 4%, which was the highest
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.
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a twenty-year period from 1990, to 2010, this
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increased
gradually
to 1, 5%, and this
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is estimated
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for reforestation in 1990 was 1, 2% and rose
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to 1, 5% in 2010, equal to this
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of Ireland in the same year. The expectation is that in 2030, the rate of tree-planting in this region will be increasing
slightly
to 1, 6%. Accounting for third place, Thailand and the
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had the same
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the years: 1% in 1990 and 2010. In 2030, this
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of Thailand is
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to grow to 1, 3%, while that for the
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will rise to around 1, 4%. Hungary is the country which has the lowest
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of reforestation: in 1990, its
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for this project was
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with tree-planting, represented 28%. Meanwhile, a tiny minority of inhabitants
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who
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is 5%, accounting for the lowest
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proportion
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IELTS academic The bar chart shows past and future figures for levels of reforestation in four countries and the world. The pie chart shows current attitudes about reforestation.

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