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Report on the consumption of renewable energy in USA

Report on the consumption of renewable energy in USA 3xabl

The graph illustrates the consumption of renewable energy in the USA over a period of 59 years starting from 1949 to 2008. As we could see that the total utilization of renewable energy have been increased drastically over the years, as the people are aware of the added advantages they give other than power. However the most popular and common is hydroelectric and wood. Hydroelectric power, had gone through greater changes over the years and had a slight increase in 2008 compared to 1949. Furthermore, construction of dams had a greater benefits apart from generating electricity, especially in the rural areas as it is very helpful for the farmers for their agricultural purposes. Samelse is with wood, the numbers doesn't seems to vary from 1949 to 2008. This is due to the fear people have on the side effects of deforestation. While biofuels are newly emerging energy resources. It had become much popular in a period of 8 years from 2000, because of its eco-friendly nature. Similar to it wind energy also become more friendly by the citizens from 2000 but not as well liked as biofuels.

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