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The given diagrams describe how a moth egg transform into an adult silkworm and the process of the production of silk cloth.

The given diagrams describe how a moth egg transform into an adult silkworm and the process of the production of silk cloth. GEwm
The given diagrams describe how a moth egg transform into an adult silkworm and the process of the production of silk cloth. Overall, the life cycle of silkworm consists of a serie of changes including a period of time developping inside a cocon. In regard to producing silk cloth, 4 stages are needed from the selection of silk thread shells to the final step of coloring. Life begins with a egg, which is laid on a leaf, then the silkworm larva takes 10 days to hatch and come out of the egg. During 4 to 6 weeks, silkworm larva grows up eating mulberry leaves, and starts producing silk thread to make its shell, which is transformed within 3 to 8 days into a cocon where the larva remain developping for exactely 16 days. At the end of this stage the larva transforms into an adult moth and the life cycle starts again. when it comes to producing silk cloth, the selected silk thread is put onto a large container to boil with water, then 300 to 900 meters of thread is unwinded before being twisted. At the final stage of the process, threads are colored and weaved.
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how a moth egg transform into an adult silkworm and the process of the production of
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, the life cycle of silkworm consists of a
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developping
inside a
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cocon
. In regard to producing
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silk
cloth, 4 stages
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from the selection of
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silk
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thread
shells to the final step of coloring.

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egg, which
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on a leaf, then the silkworm larva takes 10 days to hatch and
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out of the egg. During 4 to 6 weeks, silkworm larva grows up eating mulberry
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leaves
, and
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starts
producing
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silk
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thread
to
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make
its shell, which
is transformed
within 3 to 8 days into a
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cocon
where the larva remain
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developping
for
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exactely
16 days. At the
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of this stage the larva transforms into an adult moth and the life cycle
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starts
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when
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to producing
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silk
cloth, the selected
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silk
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thread
is put
onto a large container to boil with water, then 300 to 900 meters of
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thread
is
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unwinded
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before
being twisted
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are colored
and weaved.
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IELTS academic The given diagrams describe how a moth egg transform into an adult silkworm and the process of the production of silk cloth.

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