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The graph below shows the daily water consumption for Americans in their homes.

The graph below shows the daily water consumption for Americans in their homes. rwkN
The given column graph represents the daily water consumption in the U. S. both with and without water conservation methods. It is clear from the graph that water conservation method offers a considerable reduction in water consumption in most of the activity. Everyday gallons of water is used for different purposes. The highest use of water was done when flushing the toilet, followed by washing clothes, taking shower respectively. Least water was consumed for the purpose of washing dishes. In total, 20 gallons of water was used only for flushing the toilet. When water conservation methods were used, less amount of water was consumed in almost every activity. The water used for flushing reduced to half with the use of this method. Likewise, nearly 1-2 gallons of water was saved in every other activity, whereas water used for washing dishes and other purposes remained similar for both the methods. In conclusion, enormous amount of water can be saved with the help of water conservation methods.
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consumption in the U. S. both with and without
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water
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conservation
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. It is
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clear
from the graph that
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water
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conservation
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method
offers a considerable reduction in
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water
consumption in most of the activity. Everyday gallons of
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is
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used
for
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different
purposes. The highest
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of
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was done
when flushing the toilet, followed by washing clothes, taking shower
respectively
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was consumed
for the purpose of washing dishes. In total,
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20 gallons
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was
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used
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for flushing the toilet. When
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, less amount of
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was consumed
in almost every activity. The
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for flushing
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reduced
to half with the
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of this
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-2 gallons
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was saved
in every other activity, whereas
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used
for washing dishes and other purposes remained similar for both the
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In conclusion
, enormous amount of
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the daily water consumption for Americans in their homes.

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