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The graph shows the spending on education, medical care and pension in a particular country from 2001 to 2051. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the spending on education, medical care and pension in a particular country from 2001 to 2051. OQEN

The given line graph compares the government spending on three sectors, namely – education, health and medical sectors from 2001 to the present, and gives projections till 2051. It can be seen that in 2001, spending on education was the highest, with about 15% being spent on this sector. This expenditure has fallen slightly till the present time and is expected to fall further to 14% by 2021, after which it is projected to remain stable till 2051. Approximately 11% was spent on medical care from 2001 to 2011, after which there has been an increase in the health budget, which is projected to continue till 2021. However, there are projections of a sharp downfall in the spending on medical care to about 4% by 2051. The least proportion of spending was on pensions in 2001, which has remained stable till now and is expected to be stable till 2021. The expenditure on pensions is estimated to grow rapidly and become nearly 18% by 2051. Overall, spending on education is forecast to remain stable, but that on health and pensions will show opposing trends in the future, with the former declining and the latter escalating.

The This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
given
 line graph compares the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :national authoritypublic authority
government
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spending
 on three sectors, namely
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education, health and medical sectors from 2001 to the present, and gives projections till

2051.

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seen
 that in 2001, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spending
 on education was the highest, with about 15% being

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterSpent
spent
 on this sector. This expenditure has fallen slightly
 till the present time and is Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphexpected.expected!expected?expected:expected,expected;
expected


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to
 fall further
 to 14% by 2021, after which it is projected
 to remain You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsecuresoliddurablesafesteadyfast
stable
 till 2051.

Approximately 11% was spent
 on medical care from 2001 to 2011, after which there has been

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterAn
an
 increase in the health budget, which is projected
 to continue till 2021. However
, there are

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterProjections
projections
 of a sharp downfall in the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spending
 on medical care to about 4% by 2051.

The least proportion of You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spending
 was on pensions in 2001, which has remained You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsecuresoliddurablesafesteadyfast
stable
 till

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterNow
now
 and is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to be You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsecuresoliddurablesafesteadyfast
stable
 till 2021. The expenditure on pensions is estimated
 to Please add a punctuation mark at the end of paragraphgrow.grow!grow?grow:grow,grow;
grow


This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterRapidly
rapidly
 and become nearly
 18% by 2051.

Overall
, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spending
 on education is forecast to remain You use this word too often, consider replacing it withsecuresoliddurablesafesteadyfast
stable
, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 that on health and pensions

This sentence does not start with an uppercase letterWill
will
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :demonstrateportrayindicatedisplay
show
 opposing trends in the future, with the former declining and the latter escalating. 