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The graph shows the spending on education, medical care and pension in a particular country from 2001 to 2051. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph shows the spending on education, medical care and pension in a particular country from 2001 to 2051. OQEN
The given line graph compares the government spending on three sectors, namely – education, health and medical sectors from 2001 to the present, and gives projections till 2051. It can be seen that in 2001, spending on education was the highest, with about 15% being spent on this sector. This expenditure has fallen slightly till the present time and is expected to fall further to 14% by 2021, after which it is projected to remain stable till 2051. Approximately 11% was spent on medical care from 2001 to 2011, after which there has been an increase in the health budget, which is projected to continue till 2021. However, there are projections of a sharp downfall in the spending on medical care to about 4% by 2051. The least proportion of spending was on pensions in 2001, which has remained stable till now and is expected to be stable till 2021. The expenditure on pensions is estimated to grow rapidly and become nearly 18% by 2051. Overall, spending on education is forecast to remain stable, but that on health and pensions will show opposing trends in the future, with the former declining and the latter escalating.
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line graph compares the
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government
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spending
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education, health and medical sectors from 2001 to the present, and gives projections till

2051.

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seen
that in 2001,
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spending
on education was the highest, with about 15% being

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spent
on this sector. This expenditure has fallen
slightly
till the present time and is
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expected


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to
fall
further
to 14% by 2021, after which it
is projected
to remain
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stable
till 2051.

Approximately 11%
was spent
on medical care from 2001 to 2011, after which there has been

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an
increase in the health budget, which
is projected
to continue till 2021.
However
, there are

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projections
of a sharp downfall in the
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spending
on medical care to about 4% by 2051.

The least proportion of
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spending
was on pensions in 2001, which has remained
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stable
till

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now
and is
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expected
to be
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stable
till 2021. The expenditure on pensions
is estimated
to
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grow


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rapidly
and become
nearly
18% by 2051.

Overall
,
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spending
on education is forecast to remain
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stable
,
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but
that on health and pensions

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will
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show
opposing trends in the future, with the former declining and the latter escalating.

IELTS academic The graph shows the spending on education, medical care and pension in a particular country from 2001 to 2051.

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