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The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a europen country between 1979 and 2004.

The given graph illustrates about the comparison of consume chicken, beef, lamb and fish in Europe for 25 years. Overall, The consumption of Beef was the highest in the first period, followed by consumption in Lamb with the second highest. However, in the end of period Beef got replaced by Chicken. In addition, there is no significant change for consumption in Fish. First of all. In 1979, The consumption of beef was consist of above 200 grams and this showed a rise of consumption with under 250 grams in period of 1980. However, In the end of periode, the consumption of beef was deteriorate to slightly above 100. Likewise, The consumption of lamb was comprised of 150 grams which is significantly reduce to slightly above 50 grams 25 years later. On the other hand, Consumer of chicken were consist 140 grams and showed a growth consumption every year. In 2004 the consumption chicken were the highest from other meats. Inversely proportional with this, Fish consumption started consist above 50 grams and remained steadily until 2004.
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, lamb and fish in Europe for 25 years.

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in Fish.

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a rise of
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with under 250
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grams
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of 1980.
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25 years later.

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every year. In 2004 the
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chicken were the highest from other meats.
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and remained
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until 2004.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the consumption of fish and some different kinds of meat in a europen country between 1979 and 2004.

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