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the graph below shows the consumption of 3spreads from 1981 to 2007

the graph below shows the consumption of 3spreads from 1981 to 2007 PlRg
The line graph illustrates the amount of Margarine, Low fat reduced spreads and butter were consumption over a 26years period of a time. Overall, the figure for margarine and butter experienced a downward trend, while the lowfat reduced spreads showed an significanly rose over time. At the beginning of the period, butter and margarine become widespread, however, in final years lowfat was prevalented most Looking at the graph in more detail we can see that, in 1981 butter started from nearly 138grams, then it was witnessed an drastical rise from 1981 to 1986, and hit the peak of around 160 grams. Then it was subjected an significanlty decrease over a 21years period and reached the bottom point about 50grams. While, in 1981 the quantity of consumption of margarine was approxumately 90grams. It undergone the fluctuation between 1981 and 1991 and was its peakest level in 100grams. Over a 5years period it remained steady, then it dropped substantically to the 40grams. It is higlighted that, low fat was the least populated consumption in 1996 about 10grams. It showed an sharpest increase between 1996 and 2001. The quantity of lowfat gradually reduced from 2001 to 2007 and dropped into around 73grams
The line graph illustrates the amount of
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Margarine
, Low
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fat
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reduced
spreads and
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butter
were consumption
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over
a 26years
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period
of a time.

Overall
, the figure for
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margarine
and
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butter
experienced a downward trend, while the
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lowfat
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reduced
spreads
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showed
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an
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significanly
rose
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over
time. At the beginning of the
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period
,
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butter
and
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margarine
become widespread,
however
, in final years
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lowfat
was
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prevalented
most

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see
that, in 1981
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butter
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started
from
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138grams
, then it
was witnessed
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an
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drastical
rise from 1981 to 1986, and hit the peak of around 160
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grams
. Then it
was subjected
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an
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significanlty
decrease
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over
a 21years
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period
and reached the bottom point about
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50grams
.
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, in 1981 the quantity of consumption of
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was
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approxumately
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90grams
. It
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the fluctuation between 1981 and 1991 and was its
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peakest
level in
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100grams
.
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Over
a 5years
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period
it remained steady, then it dropped
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substantically
to the 40grams.

It is
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higlighted
that, low
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fat
was the least populated consumption in 1996 about
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10grams
. It
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showed
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an
sharpest increase between 1996 and 2001. The quantity of
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lowfat
gradually
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reduced
from 2001 to 2007 and dropped into around
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73grams
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