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The graph below provides information on figures for urban populations in different world regions.

The graph below provides information on figures for urban populations in different world regions. knLW
The presented illustration of the bar chart reveals data about world population between 2015 and 2040. Overall, it can be clearly that, the world population will have grown significantly in developing regions. However, in developed regions will have fluctuated. It is conspicuous that, the largest millions of people will have been living in developing regions from 2015 to 2040. Also, the rate of people will have grown significantly and will have reached to 4. 000 in 2040. Even so, in developed countries, the data will be same, the rate of people in developed regions will have accounted to 1. 200 in 2040.
The presented illustration of the bar chart reveals data about world population between 2015 and 2040.

Overall
, it can be
clearly
that, the world population will have grown
significantly
in developing
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regions
.
However
, in developed
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regions
will have fluctuated.

It is conspicuous that, the largest millions of
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people
will have been living in developing
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regions
from 2015 to 2040.
Also
, the rate of
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people
will have grown
significantly
and will have reached to 4. 000 in 2040. Even
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so
, in
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developed countries
, the data will be same, the rate of
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people
in developed
You use this word too often, consider replacing it with
regions
will have accounted to 1. 200 in 2040.
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IELTS academic The graph below provides information on figures for urban populations in different world regions.

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