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The graph below shows the citrus oil manufacturing process using citrus fruits.

The graph below shows the citrus oil manufacturing process using citrus fruits. ddDd
The provided diagram illustrates the citrus oil producing process from citrus fruits. To begin with, citrus fruits were sent to juice extractor in which juice of these fruits are extracted. After that juice went to mechanical process, in which liquid slurry prepared. Rest material which remained after mechanical process is used as cattle feed. Liquid slurry went to steam distillation. After that point, there are two products prepared; one is technical grade d-limoneno, while other one is Alcohol which made from molasses. After juice extraction, there are two things came as result. One is orange juice which sent to evaporator and FCOJ process. After FCOJ process, there are two outcomes. one is water phase aroma, whereas another is essence oil. Other product came from juice extractor is cold pressed orange oil. This oil sent to vaccum distillation chamber. After distillation process, fraction and folded oil as well as food grade d-limonena got at end. Overall, it is evident that various products such as oils and alcohol can be prepared by one raw material called citrus fruit.
The provided diagram illustrates the citrus
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from citrus fruits.

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with, citrus fruits were
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extractor in which
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of these fruits
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. After that
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went to mechanical
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, in which liquid slurry prepared. Rest material which remained after mechanical
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process
is
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used
as cattle feed. Liquid slurry went to steam distillation. After that point, there are two products prepared; one is technical grade
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d-limoneno
, while other one is Alcohol which made from molasses.

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juice
extraction, there are two things came as result. One is orange
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juice
which
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sent
to evaporator and
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FCOJ
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. After
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FCOJ
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, there are two outcomes.
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one
is water phase aroma, whereas another is essence
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oil
. Other product came from
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extractor is
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cold
pressed orange
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oil
. This
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oil
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to
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vaccum
distillation chamber. After distillation
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, fraction and folded
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as well
as food grade
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d-limonena
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at
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end
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, it is evident that various products such as
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oils
and alcohol can
be prepared
by one raw material called citrus fruit.
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