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The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words. Writing Task 1

The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901. wGXE
The table provides us the information about the male and female population in England and Wales who are working in factories for a period of 50 years, from 1851 to 1901. Overall, total employees who are working in factories gradually decreased from 1851 to 1901. The number of factories increased when compared to 1851. There is a gradual decrease in the male and female employees. Firstly, in 1851, male employees are around 287, 100. Women employees are nearly two-third of males. The number of male employees saw a sudden decrease in 1861 more than a half when compared to 1851. In 1871, the number of factories increased to 3 times when compared with 1861, and the number of people who are working in factories fell to half when compared to 1861.
The table provides us the information about the male and female population in England and Wales who are working in
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factories
for a period of 50 years, from 1851 to 1901.

Overall
, total
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employees
who are working in
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factories
gradually
decreased from 1851 to 1901. The
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number
of
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factories
increased when compared to 1851. There is a gradual decrease in the male and female employees.

Firstly
, in 1851, male
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employees
are around 287, 100. Women
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employees
are
nearly
two-third of
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males
. The
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number
of male
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employees
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saw
a sudden decrease in 1861 more than a half when compared to 1851.

In 1871, the
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number
of
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factories
increased to 3 times when compared with 1861, and the
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number
of
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people
who are working in
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factories
fell to half when compared to 1861.

IELTS academic The table below describes the number of employees and factories in England and Wales from 1851 to 1901.

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  American English
4 paragraphs
131 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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4.0
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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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