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The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words. IELTS Writing Process

The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans. 8PyB
The information about how the aluminum cans are recycled is illustrated by the assigned process chart. Overall, it can be explicitly observed that there are total 7 steps involved in the process of recycling aluminum cans. It starts with putting used cans from trash bins and culminates with reusing of aluminum cans. To begin with, once the used aluminum cans are collected into bins for recycling then the collected cans are transported by transportation mode. In the next step, the wasted cans have cleaned, sorted, shredded, compressed into recycling factory. Moreover, the heating and melting of cans are done by following step. Moving further, the melted liquid is rolled into 2. 5mm to 6mm thick layer. In the penaltinum step, the cans are recycled by rolled material. Eventually, the cans have been recycled to reuse by individuals.
The information about how the
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aluminum
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cans
are recycled
is illustrated
by the assigned process chart.

Overall
, it
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can
be
explicitly
observed that there are total 7 steps involved in the process of recycling
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aluminum
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cans
. It
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starts
with putting
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used
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cans
from trash bins and culminates with reusing of
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aluminum
cans.

To
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begin
with, once the
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used
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aluminum
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cans
are collected
into bins for recycling then the collected
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cans
are transported
by transportation mode. In the
next
step, the wasted
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cans
have cleaned, sorted, shredded, compressed into recycling factory.
Moreover
, the heating and melting of
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cans
are done
by following step.

Moving
further
, the melted liquid
is rolled
into 2.
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5mm
to
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6mm
thick layer. In the
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penaltinum
step, the
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cans
are recycled
by rolled material.
Eventually
, the
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cans
have
been recycled
to reuse by individuals.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the recycling process of aluminium cans.

Academic
  American English
4 paragraphs
137 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
and less than 150 words in Task 1
5.0
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.0
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Task Achievement: 5.0
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