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The graph below shows the changes in the share price of NVIDIA in dollars between 14th September and 14th October, 2021. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the changes in the share price of NVIDIA in dollars between 14th September and 14th October, 2021. dl2x6
The line graph illustrates the changes of the value of NVIDIA on the market from 14th September 2021 to 14th October in the same year. Overall, we can see a considerable fluctuation on the graph. On the first day NVIDIA cost roughly 223 dollars. During the next 4 days the graph shows a solid increase and a significant fall. From the 19th to the 24th of September its prise was skyrocketing, and on the 24th September it hit the highest point- it was about 225 dollars. Between the 24th and the 30th of September its value showed a steep downward. Around the 3rd of October reached the lowest plateau. At that day it worthen least than 200 dollars. After that until the 8th of October the price was growing significantly. In the following days it declined modestly. On the 14th of October the NVIDIA cost was just under 210 dollars.
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of the value of NVIDIA on the market from 14th September 2021 to 14th October in the same year.
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a considerable fluctuation on the graph.

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day NVIDIA cost roughly 223
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. During the
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a solid increase and a significant fall. From the 19th to the 24th of September its
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was skyrocketing, and on the 24th September it hit the highest point- it was about 225
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dollars
. Between the 24th and the 30th of September its value
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a steep downward.

Around the 3rd of October reached the lowest plateau. At that day it
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than 200
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. After that until the 8th of October the price was growing
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. In the following days it declined
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. On the 14th of October the NVIDIA cost was
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under 210
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the changes in the share price of NVIDIA in dollars between 14th September and 14th October, 2021.

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