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The graph below shows the change in the proportion of GDP in three areas in a particular country between 2000 and 2020.

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Given is the graph illustrating the modification of the GDP index in three main areas of a country from 2000 to 2020. It is clear that the percentage of GDP in health has the inclination to increase even in the foreseeable future. Meanwhile, transportation is subject to overall volatility. Standing at 3% in 2000, the figure for GDP in health is predicted to jump further to 8% in 2020. At the same time, although education had a high percentage at the first point at 5% and accelerate slightly to 6% in 2005, it is expected to suddenly decrease steadily to 4% in 2020. Transportation is the figure which has dramatic change during the research time; having the same proportion of GDP as health, it fluctuated during 10 years and followed by a growth pattern that was more varied, it will be at nearly 4% in 2020.
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Given
is the graph illustrating the modification of the GDP index in three main areas of a country from 2000 to 2020.

It is
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
clear
that the percentage of GDP in health has the inclination to increase even in the foreseeable future. Meanwhile, transportation is subject to
overall
volatility.

Standing at 3% in 2000, the figure for GDP in health
is predicted
to jump
further
to 8% in 2020. At the same time, although education had a high percentage at the
first
point at 5% and accelerate
slightly
to 6% in 2005, it is
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expected
to
suddenly
decrease
steadily
to 4% in 2020.

Transportation is the figure which has dramatic
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :
change
during the research time; having the same proportion of GDP as health, it fluctuated during 10 years and followed by a growth pattern that was more varied, it will be at
nearly
4% in 2020.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the change in the proportion of GDP in three areas in a particular country between 2000 and 2020.

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