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The graph below shows the change in the proportion of GDP in three areas in a particular country between 2000 and 2020.

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Given is the graph illustrating the modification of the GDP index in three main areas of a country from 2000 to 2020. It is clear that the percentage of GDP in health has the inclination to increase even in the foreseeable future. Meanwhile, transportation is subject to overall volatility. Standing at 3% in 2000, the figure for GDP in health is predicted to jump further to 8% in 2020. At the same time, although education had a high percentage at the first point at 5% and accelerate slightly to 6% in 2005, it is expected to suddenly decrease steadily to 4% in 2020. Transportation is the figure which has dramatic change during the research time; having the same proportion of GDP as health, it fluctuated during 10 years and followed by a growth pattern that was more varied, it will be at nearly 4% in 2020.

This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :accorded
Given
 is the graph illustrating the modification of the GDP index in three main areas of a country from 2000 to 2020.

It is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :apparent
clear
 that the percentage of GDP in health has the inclination to increase even in the foreseeable future. Meanwhile, transportation is subject to overall
 volatility.

Standing at 3% in 2000, the figure for GDP in health is predicted
 to jump further
 to 8% in 2020. At the same time, although education had a high percentage at the first
 point at 5% and accelerate slightly
 to 6% in 2005, it is This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :anticipated
expected
 to suddenly
 decrease steadily
 to 4% in 2020.

Transportation is the figure which has dramatic This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alteradjust
change
 during the research time; having the same proportion of GDP as health, it fluctuated during 10 years and followed by a growth pattern that was more varied, it will be at nearly
 4% in 2020. 

IELTS academic The graph below shows the change in the proportion of GDP in three areas in a particular country between 2000 and 2020.

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Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

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