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The table reveals, the admissions of students at Brighton co-ed school in the span of 20 years. Overall, it can be seen that the trends of admission, male's percentage and overseas students were upward, whereas other they were downward for other sectors. It is important to note that there was a dramatic increase in the enrollment sector. It was only 800 students in the initial year (1990) as compared to 3400 of 2010. It almost increased by 400%. The enrollment number inclined gradually in the 10 years of span. Also, in 1990, there were no non-EU students in the school but, it rose greatly in the following year and at the end of 2010, it reached a quarter. On the other hand, the percentage of students, who were coming from EU countries declined minimally till 2010. They were 76% against 100% of 1990. The percentage of male and female students were almost the same in 1990. However, the ratio of women started decreasing in 2000 and fell till 2010. It dropped almost 48% to 44% in 2000 and then 39% in 2010. On the flip side, men’ rate escalated greatly in 2000 and it reached to the peak in 2010 with 61% enrollment. The students, who reside in 5 miles radius of Brighton and Hove declined gradually over the period. The overall percentage of abroad students went up in 20 years.

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