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The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below. 2Xew
The line chart indicates the average proportion of people in the UK who use car, bus and train for transportaion in one day since 1970 to present. The chart also estimates these figures for the near future. Overall, it is clear that the majority of vehicles that people uses is private car. Bus also made up a significant proportion in the past but it has started to decline, whereas less people used train in the past, however it seems to experience a high growth regards to the forcast. In 1970, almost 6 millions people used car for their transporation between 1970-1980. After that this figure climbed up to around 7 millions in 2000 and gradually increased to approximately 7. 5-8 million in 2020. Moreover, it could be reach to 9 million people in 2030 given to the estimation. Bus was the second vehicles which was used with around 4 to 4. 5 millions people. Having said that it constantly decrease every year including in the next ten year of the forcast. By the end of 2030, they expect to see just only 3 million comuters still use train. Lastly, train was the least popular travelling way for commuters, there are under 3 million commuters used it. Nevertheless, the numbers were grown but with a slowly pace before faced with a sharply raise in 2010 and might be over 5 millions people in 2030
The line chart indicates the average proportion of
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people
in the UK who
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use
car, bus and train for
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transportaion
in one day since 1970 to present. The chart
also
estimates these figures for the near future.

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, it is
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clear
that the majority of vehicles that
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people
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uses
is private car. Bus
also
made up a significant proportion in the past
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but
it has
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started
to decline, whereas
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less
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people
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used
train in the past,
however
it seems to experience a high growth regards to the
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forcast
.

In 1970, almost 6
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millions
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people
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used
car for their
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transporation
between 1970-1980. After that this figure climbed up to around 7
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millions
in 2000 and
gradually
increased to approximately 7. 5-8
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million
in 2020.
Moreover
, it could be reach to 9
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million
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people
in 2030
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given
to the estimation.

Bus was the second vehicles which was
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used
with around 4 to 4. 5
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millions
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people
. Having said that it
constantly
decrease every year including in the
next
ten year of the
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forcast
. By the
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end
of 2030, they
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expect
to
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see
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just
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only
3
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million
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comuters
still
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use
train.

Lastly
, train was the least popular travelling way for commuters, there are under 3
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million
commuters
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used
it.
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, the numbers
were grown
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with a
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slowly pace
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before
faced with a
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in 2010 and might be over 5
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millions
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people
in 2030

IELTS academic The graph below shows the average number of UK commuters travelling each day by car, bus or train between 1970 and 2030. Write a report for a university, lecturer describing the information shown below.

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