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The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in four various counties of Europe- Germany, Italy, France and Austria from the year 1995 up to 2005.

The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in four various counties of Europe- Germany, Italy, France and Austria from the year 1995 up to 2005. VBPnO
The provided graph illustrates the amount of money spent on books in four various counties of Europe- Germany, Italy, France and Austria from the year 1995 up to 2005. Overall it is evident that people in Germany more money on books in comparison with other three countries. However, during the 10year period, spending on books had an upward trend in all given four countries. In detail, between 1995 and 1999 we see that money spent on books in Germany and Austria significantly increased from80 to 90 million and from 30 to 40 million, respectively. The situation in France and Italy is a bit different, an indicator of money spent on books fluctuates from 50 to 60 million and over the next six years it reached the pick of 75 million in France and 62 million in Italy. Despite the fluctuates, spending on books in Germany had gone up over 90 million. The figure for Austria ose gradually to 60 million in 2003 and reached the peak for about 72 million by the year 2005. To conclude, an increase of expenditure on books in this particular four countries means that the educated population and qualified personnel rised during this period.
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in four various counties of Europe- Germany, Italy, France and Austria from the
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1995 up to 2005.

Overall
it is evident that
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people
in Germany more
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on
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books
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period, spending on
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had an upward trend in all
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four countries.

In detail, between 1995 and 1999 we
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see
that
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money
spent on
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in Germany and Austria
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million
and from 30 to 40
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,
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. The situation in France and Italy is a bit
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, an indicator of
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spent on
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books
fluctuates from 50 to 60
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and over the
next
six years it reached the pick of 75
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million
in France and 62
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million
in Italy. Despite the fluctuates, spending on
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in Germany had gone up over 90
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million
. The figure for Austria
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ose
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in 2003 and reached the peak for about 72
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by the
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2005.

To conclude
, an increase of expenditure on
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books
in this particular four countries means that the educated population and qualified personnel
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rised
during this period.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the amount of money spent on books in four various counties of Europe- Germany, Italy, France and Austria from the year 1995 up to 2005.

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