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The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009.

The graph below shows relative price changes for fresh fruits and vegetables, sugars and sweets, and carbonated drinks between 1978 and 2009. l2bo
The line graph compares the fluctuation of prices of vegetations, sweets, and drinks, and it also exhibits the consumer prices index from 1979 to 2009. Overall, it is clear that the prices from all product types increased over the period shown, and the consumer price index also rose. In terms of fresh, fruits and vegetables stood at just over 50 in 1979. Then, it escalated swiftly to 100 in 1981 before a witnessed dramatic decline to just below 100 by 1985. Afterward, it upsurged remarkably with some fluctuations and reached just under 350 before experienced a steep decline at the end of the period. Moreover, it was higher than the consumer price index over the period shown. Regarding, sugar and sweets and carbonated drinks, they started at just above 50 in 1979. Then, the figures climbed steeply and reached 100 from 1983 to 1985, and they were leveled off and equal to each other and the consumer price index. Afterward, the figures saw noticeable growth and finished at 200 for sugar and sweets while just above 150 for carbonated drinks whereas they remained under consumer price index which leveled off between 2007 and 2009.
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from 1979 to 2009.

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, it is
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from all product types increased over the period shown, and the
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price
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also
rose.

In terms of fresh, fruits and vegetables stood at
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over 50 in 1979. Then, it escalated
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to 100 in 1981
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a witnessed dramatic decline to
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below 100 by 1985. Afterward, it upsurged
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fluctuations and reached
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under 350
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experienced a steep decline at the
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consumer
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over the period shown.

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started
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above 50 in 1979. Then, the figures climbed
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were leveled
off and equal to each other and the
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consumer
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index
. Afterward, the figures
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noticeable growth and finished at 200 for sugar and sweets while
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above 150 for carbonated drinks whereas they remained under
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which leveled off between 2007 and 2009.
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