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Projected changes in different age groups of Yemen and Italy

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This report derives from the estimations made on the quantity of various age groups and the change in said population amount over the course of 50 years. The data related to this report is illustrated by pie-charts and highlights the countries of Yemen and ITaly in particular. Overall, we can observe that a huge chunk of Yemen’s population consisted of teenagers. Whereas, in Italy Adults or the youth contributed a healthy amount to its general populace. Elders aged above 60+ were part of a small sliver of a group in Yemen, but Italy showed robust numbers in terms of their elderly population. On further examination, Yemen showcased a significant amount of children aged between 0 to 14, almost 50% of the general populace in the year 2000. However, futures projections indicated that individuals aged between 15 to 59 years will take over by a whooping 57. 3%. Senior citizens in Yemen showed marginal growth of almost 2% from its 2000 counterpart. Furthermore, the aged population of italy over 60+ years is estimated to almost double its population in the course of 50 years. However, the younger population aged between 15 to 59 however is set towards a decline by about 15%. On a closing note, the youngsters aged between 0 to 14 show a considerable decline of more or less 3%.
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amount over the course of 50 years. The data related to this report
is illustrated
by pie-charts and highlights the countries of Yemen and
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ITaly
in particular
.

Overall
, we can observe that a huge chunk of Yemen’s
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population
consisted of
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teenagers
. Whereas, in Italy Adults or the youth contributed a healthy amount to its general populace. Elders
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aged
above 60+ were part of a
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sliver of a group in Yemen,
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Italy
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showed
robust numbers in terms of their elderly population.

On
further
examination, Yemen showcased a significant amount of children
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between 0 to 14
, almost 50% of the general populace in the
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year
2000.
However
, futures projections indicated that individuals
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aged
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between 15 to 59
years will take over by a whooping 57. 3%. Senior citizens in Yemen
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showed
marginal growth of almost 2% from its 2000 counterpart.

Furthermore
, the
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aged
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population
of
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italy
over 60+ years
is estimated
to almost double its
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population
in the course of 50 years.
However
, the younger
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population
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between 15 to 59
however
is set
towards a decline by about 15%. On a closing note, the youngsters
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between 0 to 14
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a considerable decline of more or less 3%.
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