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The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992. 8oPB
This chart is the graphical representation of the UK population who watch radio and television 24hours in the year 1992. The overview of the line graph shows that 49% of people who are above 4 years old prefer to watch Television rather than radio. Throughout the year there has been a significant fluctuation on both entertainment platforms. The day and time of each medium has affected the number of viewers and their preferences as well. As we compare both Television and Radio we can establish the fact that both the modes of entertainment are used by netizens all day long. The difference is we can see that a maximum of 28% of citizens prefer to listen to the Radio in the morning from 6AM- 2PM where 8: 30AM being the highest point of increase in listeners. Whereas the latter sees a rise between 8PM-10PM and then it gradually falls down.
This chart is the graphical representation of the UK population who
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and television 24hours in the year 1992.

The overview of the line graph
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that 49% of
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who are above 4 years
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prefer to
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. Throughout the year there has been a significant fluctuation on both entertainment platforms.

The day and time of each medium has
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affected
the number of viewers and their preferences
as well
.

As we compare both Television and
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Radio
we can establish the fact that both the modes of entertainment are
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used
by netizens all day long. The difference is we can
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see
that a maximum of 28% of citizens prefer to listen to the
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Radio
in the morning from 6AM- 2PM where 8: 30AM being the highest point of increase in listeners. Whereas the latter
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a rise between 8PM-10PM and then it
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falls down.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows radio and television audiences throughout the day in 1992.

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