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The chart below shows the number of travelers using three major airports in New York city between 1995 to 2000.

The chart below shows the number of travelers using three major airports in New York city between 1995 to 2000. XYmY
The bar graph illustrates the number of airposrt visitors using a three main airport that are Jhon. F. Kennedy, LaGuardia and Newark in New York city from 1995 to 2000. Analyzing the data, in 1995 the majority of the travellers were used Laguardia airport for travelling, the passenger number was around 35milliion. While Newark and Jhon. F. Kennedy had approx 25million and almost 17million respectively. And also, same pattern was followed in the year 1996, LaGuardia airport visitors number reached 40million. However, in 1997, Jhon. F. Kennedy airport passengers number was crossed the LaGuardia travellers number, Jhon. F. Kennedy had under 40million and LaGuardia had around 41million. Over the period of the one year, drastic change occurred in the Newark airport visitors, it was above 40million. When amount of travellers in LaGuardia was again increased, but Jhon. F. Kennedy passenger was declined and reached at nearly 35million. In 1999, Jhon. F. Kennedy number was continued to decreased, and Newark airport travellers were remaine unchanged same as 1998. After one year, LaGuardia airport passangers were the highest number noticed, by contrast Jhon. F. Kennedy travellers were raised. Overall, it is seen that passengers were prefered to traveller in LaGuardia airpost over the period of six years, on contrast number of visitor in all three airport was fluctuating.
The bar graph illustrates the
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number
of
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airposrt
visitors using a three main
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airport
that are
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Jhon
. F. Kennedy, LaGuardia and Newark in
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New York city


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from
1995 to 2000.

Analyzing the data, in 1995 the majority of the
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travellers
were
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used
Laguardia
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airport
for travelling, the
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passenger
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number
was around 35milliion.

While Newark and
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Jhon
. F. Kennedy had approx
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25million
and almost
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17million
respectively
. And
also
, same pattern
was followed
in the
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year
1996, LaGuardia
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airport
visitors

number reached
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40million
.
However
, in 1997,
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Jhon
. F. Kennedy
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airport
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passengers
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number
was crossed
the LaGuardia
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travellers
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number
,
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Jhon
. F. Kennedy had
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under


40million and LaGuardia had around 41million.

Over the period of the one
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year
, drastic
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change
occurred in the Newark
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airport
visitors, it was above
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40million
. When amount of
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travellers
in LaGuardia was again increased,
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but
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Jhon
. F. Kennedy
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passenger
was declined
and reached at
nearly
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35million
. In 1999,
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Jhon
. F. Kennedy
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number
was continued
to decreased, and Newark
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airport
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travellers
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were


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remaine
unchanged same as 1998. After one
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year
, LaGuardia
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airport
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passangers
were the highest
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number
noticed, by contrast
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Jhon
. F. Kennedy
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travellers
were raised
.

Overall
, it is
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seen
that
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passengers
were
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prefered
to
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traveller
in LaGuardia
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airpost
over the period of six years, on contrast
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number
of visitor in all three airport

was fluctuating.
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IELTS academic The chart below shows the number of travelers using three major airports in New York city between 1995 to 2000.

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