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The graph below shows the numbers of tourists in Bangkok, Bali, Hanoi, and Manila between 2007 and 2017. Write a report describing the information below.

The graph below shows the numbers of tourists in Bangkok, Bali, Hanoi, and Manila between 2007 and 2017. Write a report describing the information below. VBy9Q
The graph illustrates the information regarding the figure of travellers Bankok, Bali, Hanoi and Manila have recieved, during 10 years period, between 2007 and 2017. Overall, it is noticeable that the most popular destination for tourist has always been Bankok which indicate by the highest figure of visitors from the graph in every year. Moreover, people has become more interested in taking a vacation over the time period, as the graph indicates an increase in total amount of tourists. Focusing on the growth of the line graph as there is a substancial surge of travellers making trip to Manila between the 2013 to 2017. Interestingly, in the year 2017, Manila and Bali recieved a similar number of visitors, approximately 40 millions. Moreover, travelling to Hanoi and Bankok have only a slight increase in popularity among travellers which is around 5 and 10 millions people, respectively. Turning to the other features interpreted from the graph, between the year 2011 and 2013, the figure of travellers that destination is Manila has remained stable. Whearas, in some period of time, there is a gradual decrease of tourists visiting Bankok and Hanoi.
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travellers
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Bankok
, Bali, Hanoi and
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Manila
have
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recieved
, during 10 years period, between 2007 and 2017.

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, it is noticeable that the most popular destination for tourist has always been
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Bankok
which indicate by the highest figure of visitors from the
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graph
in every
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year
.
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,
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people
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has
become more interested in taking a vacation over the time period, as the
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graph
indicates an increase in total amount of tourists.

Focusing on the growth of the line
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as there is a
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substancial
surge of
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travellers
making trip to
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Manila
between the 2013 to 2017.
Interestingly
, in the
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year
2017,
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Manila
and Bali
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recieved
a similar number of visitors, approximately 40 millions.
Moreover
, travelling to Hanoi and
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Bankok
have
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a slight increase in popularity among
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travellers
which is around 5 and 10 millions
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people
,
respectively
.

Turning to the other features interpreted from the
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, between the
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year
2011 and 2013, the figure of
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travellers
that destination is
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Manila
has remained stable.
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, in
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some
period of time, there is a gradual decrease of tourists visiting
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Bankok
and Hanoi.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows the numbers of tourists in Bangkok, Bali, Hanoi, and Manila between 2007 and 2017. Write a report describing the information below.

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