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The graph below shows how much money was spent on tourist infrastructure in four different countries from 1980 to 1992.

The graph below shows how much money was spent on tourist infrastructure in four different countries from 1980 to 1992. 53JRm
The line graph illustratss the amount of expenditure spent on tourist infrastructure by governments of Uk, France, Spain and Germany between 1980 and 1992. It is measured in euro millions. Overall, as is observed from the graph both Uk as well as France governments increased the money spent on tourist facilities, while the equivalent figure for Spain and Germany saw fluctuations and stayed relatively stable. Decreasing steadily from almost 60 million tin 1980 to just over 40 million in 1990, the expenditure of Spain again saw an increase by approximately 15 million, reverting to its original amount in 1992. Uk, meanwhile, although ranked second in 1980 at roughly 58 million, just like the same as Span, increased the spendings gradually until 1990 by around 18 million, reaching a peak of exactly 80 million in 1992, at the end of the period. The figure for Spain and Germany was comparable during the first half of a decade, at around 20 and 4p million, reslectively. However, while the former continued to soar, exceeding Spain in 1986 at just iver 42 million and reached a peak of 80 million in 1982, the latter saw a stable growth until 1990 at 42 million and declined sharply at 40 million in 1992.
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the amount of expenditure spent on tourist infrastructure by
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governments
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Uk
, France, Spain and Germany between 1980 and 1992. It
is measured
in euro
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millions
.
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, as
is observed
from the graph both
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Uk
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as well as
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increased the money spent on tourist facilities, while the equivalent figure for Spain and Germany
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saw
fluctuations and stayed
relatively
stable. Decreasing
steadily
from almost 60
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million
tin 1980 to
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over 40
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million
in 1990, the expenditure of Spain again
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saw
an increase by approximately 15
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million
, reverting to its original amount in 1992.
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Uk
, meanwhile, although ranked second in 1980 at roughly 58
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,
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like the same as Span, increased the
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spendings
gradually
until 1990 by around 18
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million
, reaching a peak of exactly 80
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million
in 1992, at the
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end
of the period. The figure for Spain and Germany was comparable during the
first
half of a decade, at around 20 and 4p
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million
,
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reslectively
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, while the former continued to soar, exceeding Spain in 1986 at
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42
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and reached a peak of 80
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in 1982, the latter
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and declined
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