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The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014. 5ooD
The bar chart provides information about percentages of women unemployment in countries England, Wales, Scotland, and Northern Ireland for two consecutive years 2013 and 2014. Overall, England and Scotland have the highest female unemployment rates similarly Wales and Northern Ireland share the least women hiring rates in 2013 and 2014. First of all, we can see that England had the greatest percentage of unemployed women with 6. 8 % in 2013. However, it was slightly decreased to 6. 5% in 2014. In addition Wales and Northern Ireland with the rate of 5. 4% and 5. 6% in 2013. Both the countries saw a downward in the percentage of unemployed women in 2014. In Northern Ireland, the percentage fell to 4. 6% and Wales with 5. 0% respectively. In Contrast, Scotland was the only country with an increasing rate of women unemployment. In 2013, it had 6. 1% of women out of work and it was inclined to 6. 7% in 2014 which was highest among four countries.
The bar chart provides information about
percentages
of
women
unemployment in
countries
England, Wales, Scotland, and Northern Ireland for two consecutive years 2013 and 2014.

Overall
, England and Scotland have the highest female unemployment
rates
similarly
Wales and Northern Ireland share the least
women
hiring
rates
in 2013 and 2014.

First of all
, we can
see
that England had the greatest
percentage
of unemployed
women
with 6. 8 % in 2013.
However
, it was
slightly
decreased to 6. 5% in 2014. In
addition
Wales and Northern Ireland with the
rate
of 5. 4% and 5. 6% in 2013. Both the
countries
saw
a downward in the
percentage
of unemployed
women
in 2014. In Northern Ireland, the
percentage
fell to 4. 6% and Wales with 5. 0%
respectively
.

In Contrast
, Scotland was the
only
country
with an increasing
rate
of
women
unemployment. In 2013, it had 6. 1% of
women
out of work and it
was inclined
to 6. 7% in 2014 which was highest among four
countries
.
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IELTS academic The graph below shows female unemployment rates in each country of the United Kingdom in 2013 and 2014.

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