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the graph below shows changes in the distribution of average household income between 1965 to 2015

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The given chart demonstrates the change in average household earnings. The information is available for the 50-year period from 1965 to 2015. Overall, it is obvious from the graph that a significant amount of money was distributed to accommodation over the specified time period. Savings remained constant throughout the first 25 years, but fell after 1990. Recreation, transportation, food, and power all increased modestly throughout the course of the time. As indicated in the graph, spending on housing assistance began at 11% in 1965 and continued continuously until 1985, when it was reduced to 10%. However, after 1985, spending climbed marginally and, by the end of the era, it was 7% greater than in the past, 17% precisely. Home improvement spending, on the other hand, has risen year after year, rising from 0. 5% to 3% last year. Spending on recreation, food, transportation, and electricity increased roughly twice as much over a 50-year span, and were each up nearly 5% last year. Savings were consistent at 12% from 1965 to 1990, but they fell over the last 25 years and made up less than 5 percent at the conclusion of the era.

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change
 in average household earnings. The information is available for the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
50-year
 period from 1965 to 2015.

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, it is obvious from the graph that a significant amount of money was distributed
 to accommodation over the specified time period. Savings remained constant throughout the first
 25 years, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 fell after 1990. Recreation, transportation, food, and power all increased modestly
 throughout the course of the time.

As indicated in the graph, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spending
 on housing assistance began at 11% in 1965 and continued continuously
 until 1985, when it was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :alleviated
reduced
 to 10%. However
, after 1985, You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spending
 climbed marginally
 and, by the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :expiration
end
 of the era, it was 7% greater than in the past, 17% precisely
. Home improvement You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
spending
, on the other hand
, has risen You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
 after You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
, rising from 0. 5% to 3% last You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
year
. You use this word too often, consider replacing it withusewasteconsumegiveinvestcontribute
Spending
 on recreation, food, transportation, and electricity increased roughly twice as much over a You use this word too often, consider replacing it withperiodbreadthtermmileagespandiameter
50-year
 span, and were each up nearly
 5% last year.

Savings were consistent at 12% from 1965 to 1990, This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
 they fell over the last 25 years and made up less than 5 percent at the conclusion of the era. 