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The graph below shown the survey of young people in four country on the most effective solution of global warming

The graph below shown the survey of young people in four country on the most effective solution of global warming WYMXb
The given column graph illustrated the outcome of survey as best solution of global warming such as, lifestyle changes, government regulations, environment issues or none of these by young people in four European countries which is Portugal, Spain, Italy or NetherlandsIt lucid form the graph that lifestyle changes take a high position among all solution in all countries on other hand none of these secure least position. (50%) Portugese young people rated lifestyle is the best changes for global warming Although, goverment regulations or environment issues secure with (20%) or (17%) respectively. besides, Spanish young people also rated high position of lifestyle changes like ( 35%) still it's saw lesser trend than the portugese. In goverment regulations or environment issues saw (17 %)or (20%) trend. The Italian and Dutch youth genre were saw same trend with slight variations percentage. Overall. only a small minority people of the countries opined that none of these factor could help reduce global warming.
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in four European countries which is Portugal, Spain, Italy or
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for global warming Although,
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IELTS academic The graph below shown the survey of young people in four country on the most effective solution of global warming

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