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The graph below show the percentage of math graduate and all gradutates who got full time job after graduating from a university in Australia,and also show the average salary of both these types of graduates

The graph below show the percentage of math graduate and all gradutates who got full time job after graduating from a university in Australia, and also show the average salary of both these types of graduates W5BXe

The line chart delineates the ratio of graduates including the math ones who were offered full-time employment in Australia after their graduation studies, whereas the table compares the standard wages of the same during eight years. Overall, maths graduates found to be outnumbering than those of all with a dramatic soar in their salaries. Firstly, in 2004, about 80% of math, as well as 60% of all graduates, secured a full-time job. Then, in the period of two to three years, both of them witnessed several fluctuations with 10 to 20 percent. Alternatively, plunging was observed in rest years with the final year recording the same figures with the initial year of the span. With regard to the table, the salary of math students was found to be climbing in a high amount with $41, 000 in 2004 to $56, 000 in the final year. Although, that for all graduates seem to transcend at a slower pace than the previous category with $41, 000 in the first period to an increment of $10, 000 in the last one.

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