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The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip

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The maps below show the centre of a small town called IslipOverall, it is cleared that a dual carriageway will cover almost the city center and there will be some housing development According to the plan, the main change to the town will be the construction of a ring road around the center. The construction of this route will be included may improvements, including shops and homes. At present, the center has a straight main road from west to east with two short lanes down to the south, one of which leads to a school and another leads to a park. Along the sideways of the main road, there are two ranges of shops along both sides of the road and residential areas in the south and a countryside area far in the north.
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to the town will be the construction of a ring
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around the center. The construction of this route will
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At present, the center has a straight main
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from west to east with two short lanes down to the south, one of which leads to a school and another leads to a park. Along the sideways of the main
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, there are two ranges of shops along both sides of the
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and residential areas in the south and a countryside area far in the north.
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IELTS academic The maps below show the centre of a small town called Islip

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  American English
3 paragraphs
134 words
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less than 250 words in Task 2
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Coherence and Cohesion: 6.5
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Lexical Resource: 5.5
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Grammatical Range: 6.5
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Task Achievement: 5.5
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