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The given below maps show the changes took place in Australia park.

The given below maps show the changes took place in Australia park. pqPa
The given layouts illustretes the changes an Australian park has undergone. There are a few things that remain unchanged and some new things have been introducing. Overall, it can be said that some additions have been made to the park to make the park more attractive for people to visit. The first map depicts the park in the past. A cycle path ran just the south of the ocean. The park was divided into two sections by a path. The right side of the park had a cafe towards the North West corner. There was a soccer field in the middle of the park and a few trees were there in the park. The left section of the park had only a few trees. Towards the south of the park, there was a road named park Avenue. There have been some changes, which can be seen in the park now. The cycle path has remained unchanged. The park still has two sections, but there are many changes that can be seen in the park. The soocer field is in the same location. The cafe has been moved a little southwards. A tennis court has been made towards the South of the soccer fields. In the left section of the park, a few benches have been setup in the Northeast part and an area for because has been made in the South East section of the park.
The
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layouts
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the
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changes
an Australian
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park
has undergone. There are a few things that remain unchanged and
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some
new things have been introducing.
Overall
, it can
be said
that
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some
additions have
been made
to the
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park
to
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make
the
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park
more attractive for
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people
to visit.

The
first
map depicts the
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park
in the past. A cycle path ran
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just
the south of the ocean. The
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park
was divided
into two
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sections
by a path. The right side of the
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park
had a
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cafe
towards the North West corner. There was a soccer field in the middle of the
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park
and a few trees were there in the
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park
. The
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left
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section
of the
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park
had
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only
a few trees. Towards the south of the
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park
, there was a road named
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park
Avenue. There have been
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some
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changes
, which can be
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seen
in the
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park
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now
. The cycle path has remained unchanged. The
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park
still
has two
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sections
,
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but
there are
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many
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changes
that can be
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seen
in the
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park
.
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The
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field is in the same location.
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The
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cafe
has been
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moved
a
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little
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southwards
. A tennis court has
been made
towards the South of the soccer fields. In the
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left
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section
of the
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park
, a few benches have
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been setup
in the Northeast part and an area for
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because
has
been made
in the South East
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section
of the
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park
.
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IELTS academic The given below maps show the changes took place in Australia park.

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5.5
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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.5
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