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The pie chart/ graph below the percentage of usage comparison between 2015 and 2020 in terms of going into bars/pubs.

The pie chart/ graph below the percentage of usage comparison between 2015 and 2020 in terms of going into bars/pubs. 7Pg93
A glance at the pie chart demonstrates the proportion of usage association during the period 5 years in terms of going into bars or pubs, in five selected usage namely: over 50, under 21, 21-30, 31-40, and 41-50. As an overall trend, it is immediately that the percentage of over 50 and 21-30 accounts for the highest usage throughout 2015. Noticeably, the proportion of usage in 21-30 is by far the most popular among the others in 2020. Looking at the details, over 5 years, the quantity of usage in 21-30 witnessed an exponential escalation of 10% from 23% to 33%. As regards users in 41-50 going into bars/ pubs, there was a climb considerably to 28%. The reverse occurred with respect to usage in 31-40 substantial fall by 10%, the figure for over 50 declined gradually to 16% until 2020, followed by that of under 21 declined steadily from 14% to 12%.
A glance at the pie chart demonstrates the proportion of
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association during the period 5 years in terms of going into bars or pubs, in five selected
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namely
:
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50, under 21, 21-30, 31-40, and 41-50.

As an
overall
trend, it is immediately that the percentage of
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over
50 and 21-30 accounts for the highest
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usage
throughout 2015.
Noticeably
, the proportion of
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in 21-30 is by far the most popular among the others in 2020.

Looking at the
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,
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over
5 years, the quantity of
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usage
in 21-30 witnessed an exponential escalation of 10% from 23% to 33%. As regards users in 41-50 going into bars/ pubs, there was a climb
considerably
to 28%. The reverse occurred with respect to
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usage
in 31-40 substantial fall by 10%, the figure for
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over
50 declined
gradually
to 16% until 2020, followed by that of under 21 declined
steadily
from 14% to 12%.
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IELTS academic The pie chart/ graph below the percentage of usage comparison between 2015 and 2020 in terms of going into bars/pubs.

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