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The pie charts below show the different reasons for flight delays in a particular Asian country in 2015 and 2016. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The pie charts below show the different reasons for flight delays in a particular Asian country in 2015 and 2016. 1aOXG
The two pie chats gives informations about why flights landed later than the scheduled time in an Asian country in the years 2015 and 2016. Overall, it is clear that flight delays were mostly due to airline operations management both in 2015 (40%) and 2016 (46%) while the less common reason was not the same between the two years: in 2015 was airport security (4%) while in 2016 were military factors (6%). Let's analyse more in detail the two charts. In 2015 only the 4% of flight delays were due to airport security while in 2016 this percetage rose up to the 13%. Bad weather caused the delay of around the 20% of flighs in both the years so that percetage remained almost constant. Finally the relative number of flights landed late in 2015 because of air traffic control decreased by more than 10% from 2015 to 2016 reaching in the latter the 12%.
The two pie chats gives
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landed later than the scheduled time in an Asian country in the years 2015 and 2016.

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delays were
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management both in 2015 (40%) and 2016 (46%) while the less common reason was not the same between the two years: in 2015 was airport security (4%) while in 2016 were military factors (6%).

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more in detail the two charts. In 2015
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delays were due to airport security while in 2016 this
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weather caused the delay of around the 20% of
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in both the years
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the relative number of
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landed late in 2015
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of air traffic control decreased by more than 10% from 2015 to 2016 reaching in the latter the 12%.
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IELTS academic The pie charts below show the different reasons for flight delays in a particular Asian country in 2015 and 2016.

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