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The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013. gRqL
The given chart compares the frequency of people eating at junk food restaurants in the USA during 2003, 2006, and 2013. Overall, the highest percentage was gained by those who ate fast food once or twice a month in 2013, while the lowest was gotten by people who went to the restaurant every single day in 2006 and 2013. Looking at the chart more closely, there was a fluctuation throughout the year. In 2003, under 5% of junk food lovers purchased food like burgers, pizza, and hotdogs every day. The percentage was then skyrocketed for the category of numerous times a week and once a week, over 15% and 30% respectively. However, in 2006 and 2013, there was three percentage which had almost identical percentage. Firstly, people who ate burgers every day, almost 5%. Another one, was in the category a few times a year, surprisingly increased from mentioned category with the same proportion of 15% each. In addition, American who has never tasted fast food was also in the same proportion of above 5% respectively. Nevertheless, the highest was ranked by those who ate once or twice a month by over 30%.
The
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chart compares the frequency of
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people
eating at junk
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food
restaurants in the USA during 2003, 2006, and 2013.
Overall
, the highest
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percentage
was gained
by those
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who
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ate
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fast
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food
once or twice a month in 2013, while the lowest
was gotten
by
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people
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who
went to the restaurant every single day in 2006 and 2013.

Looking at the chart more
closely
, there was a fluctuation throughout the year. In 2003, under 5% of junk
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food
lovers
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purchased
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food
like burgers, pizza, and
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hotdogs
every day. The
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percentage
was then skyrocketed for the category of numerous times a week and once a week, over 15% and 30%
respectively
.

However
, in 2006 and 2013, there was three
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percentage
which had almost identical
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percentage
.
Firstly
,
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people
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who
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ate
burgers every day, almost 5%. Another one, was in the category a few times a year,
surprisingly
increased from mentioned category with the same proportion of 15% each.
In addition
, American
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who
has never tasted
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fast
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food
was
also
in the same proportion of above 5%
respectively
.
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, the highest
was ranked
by those
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who
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ate
once or twice a month by over 30%.
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IELTS academic The chart shows how frequently people in the USA ate in fast food restaurants between 2003 and 2013.

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6.5
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