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The graph below presents the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010

The graph below presents the employment patterns in the USA between 1930 and 2010 9n8x

The line graph illustrates how people switch their employment with time from one field to other fields in the time period of 1930 to 2010. Overall, Farming, fishing, and Foresting are exponentially decreased with time. In comparison, All other fields were adapted the same way like the first few years little increase and then some are higher and some are the same as they started In the year 1930, Farming, fishing, and Foresting were employed by 75% of the population which will face a decline over time, and less than 10% of people choosing this field in 2010. While technical, industrial and sales and office were less popular in 1930 which were in between 0 to 10% but after 50 years people preferred them over other areas of employment up to 40%. Other services were less popular among people in 1930 and also follow the same trend throughout the years to 2010.

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