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The diagram below shows the plan of a medical centre in 2008 and 2010. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows the plan of a medical centre in 2008 and 2010. 9NWw
The given diagram illustrates the project of a medical center in 2008 and in 2010. Overall, it is manifest from the diagram that, there were lots of changes that were made in just two years. According to the diagram, in 2008, the main entrance was opened to the waiting room that led towards the north side. In the waiting room, staff office and reception were there. To the right side of the waiting room, a laboratory was opened which also had access from the waiting room. On the northwest side, the treatment room was opened. From the right side of the treatment room, there was three doctor's office which also opened the door to the corridor. In 2010, looking towards to the southwest ward an education room and mother and child room were constructed. The pharmacy was designed on the southeast side behind the laboratory which also opened the door to the corridor. Interestingly, a doctor's office turned into small and converted to four instead of three officers. The storeroom was added to the northeast side just after the doctor's room.
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diagram illustrates the project of a medical center in 2008 and in 2010.

Overall
, it is manifest from the diagram that, there were lots of
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changes
that
were made
in
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just
two years.

According to the diagram, in 2008, the main entrance
was opened
to the
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waiting
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room
that led towards the north side. In the
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waiting
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room
, staff office and reception were there. To the right side of the
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waiting
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room
, a laboratory
was opened
which
also
had access from the
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waiting
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room
. On the northwest side, the treatment
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room
was opened
. From the right side of the treatment
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room
, there was three
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doctor's
office which
also
opened the door to the corridor.

In 2010, looking towards to the southwest ward an education
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room
and mother and child
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room
were constructed
. The pharmacy
was designed
on the southeast side behind the laboratory which
also
opened the door to the corridor.
Interestingly
, a doctor's office turned into
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small
and converted to four
instead
of three officers. The storeroom was
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added
to the northeast side
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just
after the doctor's
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room
.
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IELTS academic The diagram below shows the plan of a medical centre in 2008 and 2010.

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181 words
6.5
Overall Band Score
Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0
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