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writing task 1 about bar chart

writing task 1 about bar chart 56WXN

The bar chart indicates how citizens in France and the UK spent money on some products in the year 2010. Overall, cars in the UK were spent on the most, while the most notable difference was in the camera category. Regarding cars spending, French people allocated 400, 000 pounds while the figure for the UK was higher, at 450, 000 pounds. The expenditure on cars in France was at the same as the amount of money spent on books in the UK but only 300, 000 pounds was paid in France. However, the amount spent on computers in two countries was similar, residents in the UK expended 350, 000 pounds in comparison with France which used approximately 300, 000 pounds. In terms of perfume, only a small amount of money was purchased in the UK (less than 150, 000 pounds) while in the UK, this product occupied 200, 000 pounds. The considerable difference could be seen in the expenditure on cameras in the UK and France, which was above 350, 000 pounds and only 150, 000 respectively.

The bar chart indicates how citizens in France and the UK You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 money on This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:a number of
some
 products in the year 2010.

Overall
, cars in the UK were You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 on the most, while the most notable difference was in the camera category.

Regarding cars spending, French This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 allocated 400, 000 pounds while the figure for the UK was higher, at 450, 000 pounds. The expenditure on cars in France was at the same as the amount of money You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 on books in the UK This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:on the contrary
but
This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 300, 000 pounds was paid
 in France. However
, the amount You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwastedfinisheduseddeadlost
spent
 on computers in two countries was similar, residents in the UK expended 350, 000 pounds in comparison
 with France which This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploited
used
 approximately 300, 000 pounds.

In terms of perfume, This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 a This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:tiny
small
 amount of money was This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :acquired
purchased
 in the UK (less than 150, 000 pounds) while in the UK, this product occupied 200, 000 pounds. The considerable difference could be This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :witnessed
seen
 in the expenditure on cameras in the UK and France, which was above 350, 000 pounds and This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exclusively
only
 150, 000 respectively
. 