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The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features,and make comparisons wher relevant.

The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station. pR63w
Given flow chart illustrates how a hydroelectric power station produces electricity. In overall there is tree major sections which consists of a reservoir dams which holds water flowing river, a big pipe which carries the water from reservoir and a generator which runs on the power of flowing water and generates electricity. Water flows from a near by river is restricted by a huge dam which helps to store the water. There is intake valve is placed at the bottom of the high level reservoir, which is open at the daytime and will be closed on night. When the intake valve is opened water flows from the reservoir to generator through the big pipes placed between dam and generators. These pipes are in a declined position which is essential in increasing the speed of water flow. This water rushes of generators which is situated in the power station and creates electricity. In the generator kinetic energy of the water is converted into the electric energy. Generated electricity is then transmitted through the power lines to the national grid. The water passes through the turbine flows to a low-level reservoir. Although the turbines are used to generate electricity in the day time, in the night time it is used to pump water from low level reservoir to the high level reservoir. consequently the cycle is repeated continuously.
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Given
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flow
chart illustrates how a hydroelectric
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power
station produces electricity.

In
overall
there is tree major sections which consists of a
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reservoir
dams which holds
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water
flowing river, a
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big
pipe which carries the
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water
from
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reservoir
and a generator which runs on the
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power
of flowing
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water
and generates electricity.

Water
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flows
from a
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near by
river
is restricted
by a huge dam which
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helps
to store the
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water
. There is intake valve
is placed
at the bottom of the high level
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reservoir
, which is open at the daytime and will
be closed
on night. When the intake valve
is opened
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water
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flows
from the
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reservoir
to generator through the
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big
pipes placed between dam and generators. These pipes are in a declined position which is essential in increasing the speed of
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water
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flow
. This
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water
rushes of generators which
is situated
in the
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power
station and creates electricity. In the generator kinetic energy of the
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water
is converted
into the electric energy. Generated electricity is then transmitted through the
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power
lines to the national grid. The
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water
passes through the turbine
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flows
to a low-level
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reservoir
. Although the turbines are
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used
to generate electricity in the day time, in the
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night time
it is
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used
to pump
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water
from low level
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reservoir
to the high level
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reservoir
.
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consequently
the cycle
is repeated
continuously
.

IELTS academic The diagram below shows how electricity is generated in a hydroelectric power station.

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226 words
6.0
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