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The charts and table below show the percentage of school leavers entering higher education (college and universities), and graduate earnings one year after graduation.

The charts and table below show the percentage of school leavers entering higher education (college and universities), and graduate earnings one year after graduation. KwoNN
The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of graduate income after graduating one year in 1987 and 2007. Overall, the rate of graduates who were paid higher than national average was highest whilst the figure for jobless made up the least of the total in both two years. Looking into more details, the proportion of graduates without work accounted for 11%; however, this figure dipped notably to 3% in 2007. Furthermore, a considerable decline was seen at the number of graduates who got paid twice as much as the national average, from 18% in 1987 to 5% in 2007. On the other hand, the rate of graduates with earnings less than the national average was roughly doubled from a quarter to more than two-fifths after two decades. Moreover, graduates with higher revenue than the national average occupied 46% in 1987, then there was a slight growth to 47% in 2007.
The two pie charts illustrate the proportion of
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income after graduating one year in 1987 and 2007.

Overall
, the rate of
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graduates
who
were paid
higher than
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national
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average
was highest whilst the figure for jobless made up the least of the total in both two years.

Looking into more
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, the proportion of
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graduates
without work accounted for 11%;
however
, this figure dipped
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to 3% in 2007.
Furthermore
, a considerable decline was
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seen
at the number of
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graduates
who
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got
paid twice as much as the
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national
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average
, from 18% in 1987 to 5% in 2007.

On the other hand
, the rate of
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graduates
with earnings less than the
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national
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average
was roughly doubled from a quarter to more than two-fifths after two decades.
Moreover
,
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graduates
with higher revenue than the
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national
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occupied 46% in 1987, then there was a slight growth to 47% in 2007.

IELTS academic The charts and table below show the percentage of school leavers entering higher education (college and universities), and graduate earnings one year after graduation.

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