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The following maps show the changes that have taken place in the centre of a town since 1700.

The following maps show the changes that have taken place in the centre of a town since 1700. 9L7b0
The two figures compare the developments that have taken place in the centre of a metropolitan since 1700. It can be observed that it transformed from agricultural land into a simple commercialized area. In 1700, it can be seen that there is a river in the southwest as well as a bridge, in the north is a Goode Farm. Moreover, in the middle of the high street is located a market square, on the left side is a small hotel on the right a little church. Meanwhile, on the southeast, there is a mini steggle farm, on the south, it has three shops and fields in the lower direction plus by the southeast a single house. Furthermore, between St. Peter's Lane and Market St, by the east, it has average stables and two minimum houses. On the other hand, in the present time the farmlands and the fields disappeared, the Goode farm was converted into a tremendous car park and the Steggle Farm built into a street, the hotel was enlarged while on the left side there is a green public park. One road was classified in the southwest, a roundabout was found by the center also two more shops were constructed. Lastly, an enormous supermarket was assembled in the southeast, more homes on the left, a block of flats on top of St. Peter's Lane, an increasing number of houses on the left and right sides of Market Street.
The two figures compare the developments that have taken place in the
centre
of a metropolitan since 1700. It can
be observed
that it transformed from agricultural land into a simple commercialized area. In 1700, it can be
seen
that there is a river in the southwest
as well
as a bridge, in the north is a Goode
Farm
.
Moreover
, in the middle of the high street
is located
a market square, on the
left
side is a
small
hotel on the right a
little
church. Meanwhile, on the southeast, there is a mini
steggle
farm
, on the south, it has three shops and fields in the lower direction plus by the southeast a single
house
.
Furthermore
, between St. Peter's Lane and Market St, by the east, it has average stables and two minimum
houses
.
On the other hand
, in the present time the farmlands and the fields disappeared, the Goode
farm
was converted
into a tremendous car park and the
Steggle
Farm
built into a street, the hotel
was enlarged
while on the
left
side there is a green public park. One road
was classified
in the southwest, a roundabout
was found
by the center
also
two more shops
were constructed
.
Lastly
, an enormous supermarket
was assembled
in the southeast, more homes on the
left
, a block of flats on top of St. Peter's Lane, an increasing number of
houses
on the
left
and right sides of Market Street.
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IELTS academic The following maps show the changes that have taken place in the centre of a town since 1700.

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