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The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030. QkV3
The graph indicates the figures for consumption of energy in the U. S. A since 1980 wiht estimation until 2030. Overall, when we take a look at te graph, we see items have a number of fluctuations over the years. Some items have significant changes, whilst others almost have not been changed over the years. Hydropower was around 3 and were predicted to get almost the same amount by 2030. Solar Wind and Nuclear on the other hand will be differed from their previous amount of the Quadrillion Units with around 5 and 6. Coal was about 17 and were predicted to reach about to 27. Natural Gas was precisely 20, however, expecting to be increased approximately to 23. Finally, Petrol and Oil was exactly 35 by 1980 and estimated to get around 48 Quadrillio Units in 2030.
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Overall
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items have a number of fluctuations over the years.
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Some
items have significant
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changes
, whilst others almost have not been
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changed
over the years.

Hydropower was around 3 and
were predicted
to
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get
almost the same amount by 2030. Solar Wind and Nuclear
on the other hand
will
be differed
from their previous amount of the Quadrillion Units with around 5 and 6. Coal was about 17 and
were predicted
to reach about to 27. Natural Gas was
precisely
20,
however
, expecting to
be increased
approximately to 23.
Finally
, Petrol and Oil was exactly 35 by 1980 and estimated to
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get
around 48
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Quadrillio
Units in 2030.

IELTS academic The graph below gives information from a 2008 report about consumption of energy in the USA since 1980 with projections until 2030.

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