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In our life that we have many times and test delicious one is honey, ın this diagram give us that the bees produce honey part one part and also gives one that the words information of honey and flowers.

In our life that we have many times and test delicious one is honey, ın this diagram give us that the bees produce honey part one part and also gives one that the words information of honey and flowers. GMrem
In our life that we have many times and test delicious one is honey, ın this diagram give us that the bees produce honey part one part and also gives one that the words information of honey and flowers. Bees are as known hard worker is a sort of insects familiar. They begin to produce honey process in their hive where also bear and keep themself far from a dangerous thing, evidence for this is provided by a rainy storm or attack of bears. After They live in their home, they fly to shinny flowers to collect nectar is for source to create honey. When they have enough nectar, they turn back to their home. Not only, They produce honey but also they make the flowers’ pollens sprinkle to land. When they are in their hive, they start to fill their cells up with these nectars. By their wings, they let honey filling empty sides. The last step to make up honey is owing to water evaporation. Although It could take much time, Bees do that without tired every day.
In our life that we have
many
times and
test
delicious one is honey,
ın
this diagram give us that the bees produce honey part one part and
also
gives one that the
words
information of honey and flowers.

Bees are as known
hard
worker is a sort of insects familiar. They
begin
to produce honey process in their hive where
also
bear and
keep
themself
far from a
dangerous
thing, evidence for this
is provided
by a rainy storm or attack of bears. After They
live
in their home, they
fly
to shinny flowers to collect nectar is for source to create honey. When they have
enough
nectar, they turn back to their home. Not
only
, They produce honey
but
also
they
make
the flowers’
pollens
sprinkle to land. When they are in their hive, they
start
to fill their cells up with these
nectars
. By their wings, they
let
honey filling empty sides. The last step to
make
up honey is owing to water evaporation.

Although It could take much time, Bees do that without tired every day.
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IELTS academic In our life that we have many times and test delicious one is honey, ın this diagram give us that the bees produce honey part one part and also gives one that the words information of honey and flowers.

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