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The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The diagram below shows how instant noodles are manufactured. BEEw

The diagram illustrate the process involved in production of the instant noodles. Overall, there are total eight different steps involved in to produce noodles from the flour to the final box packaging. In the first stage of process, Flour stored in the silos tank, this stored flour mixed with the other ingredients like water and oil. This mixture formed into dough sheets with the use of rollers in the third step. Then after this dough sheets cut in to the strips with the use of cutters. In the fifth stage that formed noodles filled in to the round discs. Filled disc now cooked in the oil with certain temperature and after that going to dry in the dryer machine. In the seventh step that dried noodle disc filled into the cup and topping with vegetables and different spices in the cup. At the final stage that cup going to be labelling and next for sealing. Now instant noodles are ready to store or dispatched to distribute to the market.

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illustrate
 the process involved in production of the instant noodles.

Overall
, there are total eight This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 steps involved in to produce You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 from the flour to the final box packaging.

In the first
 stage of process, Flour stored in the silos tank, this stored flour mixed with the other ingredients like water and oil. This mixture formed into dough sheets with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of rollers in the third step. Then after this dough sheets This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :minimize
cut
 in to the strips with the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 of cutters. In the fifth stage that formed You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 filled in to the round discs. Filled disc This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
now
 cooked in the oil with certain temperature and after that going to dry in the dryer machine.

In the seventh step that dried You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodle
 disc filled into the cup and topping with vegetables and This phrase/word is too simple and can be replaced with:various
different
 spices in the cup. At the final stage that cup going to be labelling and next
 for sealing. This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :nowadays
Now
 instant You use this word too often, consider replacing it withcoconut
noodles
 are ready to store or dispatched to distribute to the market. 