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The chart shows the number of men and women in further education in three periods in part time education and full time education.

The chart shows the number of men and women in further education in three periods in part time education and full time education. KVq63

Both the combinatorial bar charts depict the number of men and women were doing full-time and part-time education in Britain in three periods. At a glance, it is observed that the striking factor being the trend of overall discrepancies and the number of men and women and further education. On the statistical analysis, it can be vividly seen that in the years 1970 and 1971, 100000 men were studying in part time while approximately 850000 females learning part time. In 1980 and 1981 of taking part time education of man decreased by about 200000 and number of females increased by 100000. In the years 1990 and 1991 number of female was above 800000 while females were almost 1100000 respectivless. In the years 1980/81, 800, 000 males were taking full-time education. Whereas number of women was much. In 1990 and 1991 females and males both were sharing the same platform while taking full-time education with 300000 men and women. Finally, it can be derived, high number of males and females were taking part time education whereas number for full time education was less

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