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The graph below gives historical information and projections about changes in population in the United States, Nigeria and Japan.

The graph below gives historical information and projections about changes in population in the United States, Nigeria and Japan. Ml2AN
The given line graph compares historical data and projection regarding change in population in 3 countries namely: United States, Nigeria and Japan from 1950 t0 2050. Overall, the population of United States, Japan and Nigeria increased until now and According to the projection United States and Nigeria maybe rise whereas japan will probably leveled off to the initial amounts. And Nigeria population may have the biggest change between them over the period shown. In1950, United States population was about 180 Millions of people. The figures for japan and Nigeria where lower, at about 100 million and 50 million respectively. The population of Nigeria gradually raised until it over took the population of japan in 2000, furthermore it is excepted that the Nigeria population will probably exceed from united states population between 2025 until 2050. and it may go up to the 600 million by the end of 2050. Conversely, it is expected that japan population will probably minimally drop until the med of 2025 to 2050 but after that it will be level off and remain the same constant of 100 million by the end of 2050.
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line graph compares historical data and projection regarding
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change
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, Nigeria and
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from 1950 t0 2050
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population
of
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States
,
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Japan
and Nigeria increased until
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now
and According to the projection
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United
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States
and Nigeria maybe rise whereas
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japan
will
probably
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leveled
off to the initial amounts. And Nigeria
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population
may have the biggest
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change
between them over the period shown.

In1950,
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United
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States
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population
was about 180
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Millions
of
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people
. The figures for
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japan
and Nigeria where lower, at about 100
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million
and 50
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million
respectively
. The
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population
of Nigeria
gradually
raised until it over took the
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population
of
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japan
in 2000,
furthermore
it
is excepted
that the Nigeria
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population
will
probably
exceed from
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united
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states
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population
between 2025 until 2050.
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and
it may go up to the 600
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million
by the
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end
of 2050.

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expected
that
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japan
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will
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minimally
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after that it will be level off and remain the same constant of 100
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million
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end
of 2050.
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