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The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant.

The line graph shows data about the medium temperatures throughout a year, while the table shows information about the total hours that the sun shines during a year in three different locations: London, New York and Sydney. Overall, New York and London reach their highest temperatures in July, whereas in the same month the temperatures in Sydney sink to a trough. New York reaches its peak at almost 30 degrees, so that it constitutes the warmest city within the group. It is next followed by Sydney at 25 degrees in January, while the last place belongs to London at less than 25 degrees. Similarly, New York is also the place with most bright hours, which accomplish more than 2, 500 hours with sun per year. Secondly it comes Sydney with 2, 473 in total and in the final position is situated London, with less than half the hours that New York becomes.
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data about the medium temperatures throughout a year, while the table
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information about the total
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York reaches its peak at almost 30 degrees,
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that it constitutes the warmest city within the group. It is
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IELTS academic The graph and table below show the average monthly temperatures and the average number of hours of sunshine per year in three major cities.

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