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The bar chart below shows the number of research student studying different subject in 2005

The bar chart illustrates how many male and female research students studied six different subjects (linguistic, psychology, natural science, engineering, programming and mathematics) in 2005. Overall, there were more male research students than females in 2005. Although the most popular subject for both genders was natural sciences, men least preferred linguistic and women showed little interested in mathematics. Linguistics was the only subject that was favored by women more than men. There was a similar number of men and women in three subjects. There were equal members in research students studying natural sciences. There was a difference between the gender of about 25 in both psychology and linguistic with more women learning linguistic (around 110) and more men taking psychology (200). A difference of about half was evident in engineering and programming where 150 men choose both subjects. By contrast, 200 men selected mathematics which was approximately five folds that of women (about 40).
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