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The line graph illustrates the avarage number of UK visitors everyday by using car, bus or train during 1970 to 2030 and it counts on millions.

The line graph illustrates the avarage number of UK visitors everyday by using car, bus or train during 1970 to 2030 and it counts on millions. 1GmG

The line graph illustrates the avarage number of UK visitors everyday by using car, bus or train during 1970 to 2030 and it counts on millions. In 1970, most of the people were using car and train was the least. Moreover, it remains same through 1970 to 2010. On the other hand, the least position was taken by bus in 2020 and train took the second position. In 2030, approximately 9 million people will use car around 3 million visitor will use train and about 5 million people will use bus for travel. In conclusion, the car always takes the first position and bus and train altering their place by the time.

The line graph illustrates the Possible spelling mistake found.average
avarage
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car
, bus or You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrackcaravanlineconvoy
train
 during 1970 to 2030 and it counts on millions.

In 1970, most of the This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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car
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train
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, it remains same through 1970 to 2010. On the other hand
, the least position was taken
 by bus in 2020 and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrackcaravanlineconvoy
train
 took the second position.

In 2030, approximately 9 million This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
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use
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car
 around 3 million Possible agreement error. The noun 'visitor' seems to be countable, so consider using: "visitors".visitors
visitor
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use
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train
 and about 5 million This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :individualsnationsociety
people
 will This phrase/word (depending on the context) can be potentially replaced with :exploit
use
 bus for travel.

In conclusion
, the You use this word too often, consider replacing it withwagonvanautobusridemachine
car
 always takes the first
 position and bus and You use this word too often, consider replacing it withtrackcaravanlineconvoy
train
 altering their place by the time. 