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The line graph illustrates the avarage number of UK visitors everyday by using car, bus or train during 1970 to 2030 and it counts on millions.

The line graph illustrates the avarage number of UK visitors everyday by using car, bus or train during 1970 to 2030 and it counts on millions. 1GmG
The line graph illustrates the avarage number of UK visitors everyday by using car, bus or train during 1970 to 2030 and it counts on millions. In 1970, most of the people were using car and train was the least. Moreover, it remains same through 1970 to 2010. On the other hand, the least position was taken by bus in 2020 and train took the second position. In 2030, approximately 9 million people will use car around 3 million visitor will use train and about 5 million people will use bus for travel. In conclusion, the car always takes the first position and bus and train altering their place by the time.
The line graph illustrates the
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number of UK visitors everyday by using
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car
, bus or
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train
during 1970 to 2030 and it counts on millions.

In 1970, most of the
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people
were using
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car
and
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train
was the least.
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, it remains same through 1970 to 2010.
On the other hand
, the least position
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by bus in 2020 and
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train
took the second position.

In 2030, approximately 9 million
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will
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car
around 3 million
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visitor
will
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train
and about 5 million
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people
will
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bus for travel.

In conclusion
, the
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car
always takes the
first
position and bus and
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train
altering their place by the time.
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IELTS academic The line graph illustrates the avarage number of UK visitors everyday by using car, bus or train during 1970 to 2030 and it counts on millions.

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