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The line graph illustrates the number of tourists of England who visited four different attractions, namely the Art gallery, Pavillion, pier, and festival in Brighton from the years 1980-2010.

The line graph illustrates the number of tourists of England who visited four different attractions, namely the Art gallery, Pavillion, pier, and festival in Brighton from the years 1980-2010. Ly3K

The line graph illustrates the number of tourists of England who visited four different attractions, namely the Art gallery, Pavillion, pier, and festival in Brighton from the years 1980-2010. Overall, pavillion had the highest number of visitors in 1995 and Pier had the least in 1980. Also, the percentage of Festival visitors remained almost constant throughout this period. There are only 10% of people visiting Pier in 1980, which increased slightly by around 5%in the year 1985. In the following years, the number fluctuated between 10-15% till 1990 until it reached 22% by the end of 2010. Festival did not see a noticeable change in thirty-year period and stayed almost constant to 30% with few fluctuations in between. On the other hand, art gallery started at 20% and rose abruptly to 45% in the year 1990, remained more or less constant for the next ten years. It dropped significantly to 8%by the end of 2010. Starting at 24% in 1980, the number of pavillion visitors grew gradually and reached the height of 48% in 1995. the number declined in 2010 to 30%.

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, pier, and festival in Brighton from the years 1980-2010.

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