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The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. 5jlA
Sample Answer 2: The given graph shows the water consumption in different sectors and how water usage changes rapidly from 1900 to 2000. It also compares the consumption of water in the agriculture sector in two different countries according to their population. Throughout the century, the highest water consumption could be observed in agricultural sector respectively which was initially 500 km³ and rose steadily approximately to 3000 km³ respectively. Usage of water recorded at a minimal level in 1900 and it remained same in half of the century. In 1950 and onwards, water consumption in industrial sector grew significantly to over 1000 km³ while in domestic sector slightly increment in water usages can be seen which was about only 300 km³. The given table illustrates the water consumption in different areas of the world. Irrigated land in Brazil was 26, 500 km2 with the population of 176 million and water consumption per person was 359 m³ whereas D. R. C possesses 100 km2 irrigated land with the lowest number of population (only 5. 2 million) and they consumed 8 m³ water per person respectively. Moreover, Brazil consumed more water while Congo consumed less water in irrigated lands. (Approximately 188 words) [ Written by - Faisal Ali ] Sample Answer 3: The line graph and table demonstrate the trends of the global water use in three different sectors from 1900 to 2000 and compares the water usage in Congo and Brazil in 2001. There was an overall upward trend in water use in these three sectors over this period. Water consumption in Brazil was much higher than that of Congo. Consuming water in agriculture, industrial and domestic fields all increased dramatically during this time. The figures for agriculture show the most significant changes of all. Between 1900 and 1950 its quantity rose to around 1, 000 km3 and then there was a sudden rise of 2, 000 km3 in 2000. The patterns of industrial and domestic water consumption were very similar to each other. Starting at almost 100 and 50 km3 respectively in 1900 and had remained nearly constant until 1950. After that, the former jumped noticeably to around 110 km3 in 2000. Likewise, the later saw a significant peak, rising by nearly 5 times (from approximately 50 to 250 km3) at the same time. It is clearly seen from the table that the water consumption in Brazil, which had 176 million people, was significantly higher than that of Congo in spite of lower population in Congo (5. 2 million), which had 265 times as less space as Brazil had.
Sample Answer 2:

The
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given
graph
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shows
the
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water
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consumption
in
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different
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sectors
and how
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water
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usage
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changes
rapidly
from 1900 to 2000. It
also
compares the
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consumption
of
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water
in the agriculture
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sector
in two
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different
countries according to their population.

Throughout the century, the highest
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water
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consumption
could
be observed
in agricultural
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sector
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respectively
which was
initially
500 km³ and rose
steadily
approximately to 3000 km³
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respectively
.
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Usage
of
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water
recorded at a minimal level in 1900 and it remained same in half of the century. In 1950 and onwards,
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water
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consumption
in industrial
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sector
grew
significantly
to over 1000 km³ while in domestic
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sector
slightly
increment in
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water
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usages
can be
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seen
which was about
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only
300 km³.

The
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given
table illustrates the
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water
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consumption
in
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different
areas of the world. Irrigated land in Brazil was 26, 500 km2 with the population of 176
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million
and
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water
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consumption
per person was 359 m³ whereas D. R. C possesses 100 km2 irrigated land with the lowest number of population (
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only
5. 2
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million)
and they consumed 8 m³
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water
per person
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respectively
.
Moreover
, Brazil consumed more
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water
while Congo consumed less
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water
in irrigated lands.

(Approximately 188 words)
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Faisal Ali
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Sample Answer 3:

The line graph and table demonstrate the trends of the global
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water
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use
in three
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different
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sectors
from 1900 to 2000 and compares the
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water
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usage
in Congo and Brazil in 2001. There was an
overall
upward trend in
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water
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use
in these three
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sectors
over this period.
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Water
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consumption
in Brazil was much higher than that of Congo.

Consuming
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water
in agriculture, industrial and domestic fields all increased
dramatically
during this time. The figures for agriculture
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show
the most significant
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changes
of all. Between 1900 and 1950 its quantity rose to around 1, 000 km3 and then there was a sudden rise of 2, 000 km3 in 2000. The patterns of industrial and domestic
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water
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consumption
were
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very
similar to each other. Starting at almost 100 and 50 km3
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respectively
in 1900 and had remained
nearly
constant until 1950. After that, the former jumped
noticeably
to around 110 km3 in 2000.
Likewise
, the
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later
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saw
a significant peak, rising by
nearly
5 times (from approximately 50 to 250 km3) at the same time.

It is
clearly
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seen
from the table that the
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water
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consumption
in Brazil, which had 176
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million
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people
, was
significantly
higher than that of Congo
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in spite of
lower population in Congo (5. 2
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million)
, which had 265 times as less space as Brazil had.
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IELTS academic The graph and table below give information about water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

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