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The graph and table below give information about the water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.

The graph and table below give information about the water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries. VJ1w
The provided line graph describes the measure of water utilized around the globe in the three major sectors over a century, and a table which describes the analysis of the two countries on the basis of population, the part of land used in irrigation and the volume of water required per person for the year 2000. Through the course of the supplied graph about the global water usage, shows all three sectors have recorded the lowest demand in the year of 1900, although all-time high needs of water has been observed in 2000. Overall, the table suggests to Brazil leads in all the three categories when compared to Congo. Moreover, from 1900 to 2000, an increase of demands for about six times is seen from 500 km3 to 3000 km3; however, a minor increase in the requirements of water with industrial usage is recorded with a jump from roughly 100 km3 to 1000 km3, and a gradual growth for domestic use i. e. , from approximately 100 km3 to 500 km3. In addition, by analyzing the table, the water consumption trends of two countries, with a vast distinction, Brazil seems to have a greater population and about 265 times more land than that of Cong. Finally in terms of water consumption table, Brazilians are found to be extremely lavish with water consumption with a difference of 351 m3.
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utilized around the globe in the three major sectors over a century, and a
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which
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the analysis of the two countries on the basis of population, the part of land
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used
in irrigation and the volume of
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required per person for the year 2000.

Through the course of the supplied graph about the global
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usage,
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all three sectors have recorded the lowest demand in the year of 1900, although all-time high needs of
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in 2000.
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suggests to Brazil leads in all the three categories when compared to Congo.

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from 500 km3 to 3000 km3;
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with industrial usage
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with a jump from roughly 100 km3 to 1000 km3, and a gradual growth for domestic
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use
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from approximately 100 km3 to 500 km3.

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, by analyzing the
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, the
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consumption trends of two countries, with a vast distinction, Brazil seems to have a greater population and about 265 times more land than that of Cong.
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Finally
in terms of
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consumption
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, Brazilians
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consumption with a difference of 351 m3.
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IELTS academic The graph and table below give information about the water use worldwide and water consumption in two different countries.

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